By popular demand, by which I mean 100% of my responders...and very possibly, readers..., and by which I mean, well, Niece Becca, I am going to post the poem, if one can even call it that, that I referred to a few posts below when I was writing about um, checks post, poetry.
As a reminder, this was what I wrote while on my 4871 mile bike trip from San Francisco in 1982 passing through LA, San Diego, Flagstaff, Oklahoma City, Kansas City, Chicago, Detroit, Toronto, Burlington VT, home, and finally around the field in Veterans Stadium before completing the last 60+ miles to Atlantic City.
God?
God? Why do you put the wind in my face
instead of my back
so you could help push me along?
(A gust of wind on my back)
God? Why do you keep the sun so bright
when my water bottles are dry
and the next town is 25 miles away?
(A small cloud covers the sun)
God? Why do people throw things at me as they pass
and miss me with their cars
by only a foot or two?
(A car slows down as it passes and the people inside
ask me if there is anything I need)
God? Why do I carry on these running
conversations with you,
if I keep telling people that I don't believe in you?
(A gust of wind on my back)
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm excuse me sir, what?
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To elaborate: I am totally blown away by this. not only is the language and storyline intriguing and surprising, it has a creative form. and that ending is just so good.
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